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testground/benchmark/compositions/docker-compose.jsonnet (1)
14-14: Enhanced scalability with dynamic service instance generationThe modification to use
std.extVar('nodes')for determining the number of service instances is a significant improvement. It allows for dynamic scaling based on external configuration, making the setup more versatile for different testing scenarios.However, consider adding a safeguard against potential edge cases:
Consider adding a check to ensure 'nodes' is always a positive integer. You could use Jsonnet's
std.max()function to enforce a minimum value:for i in std.range(0, std.max(std.extVar('nodes'), 1) - 1)This ensures at least one instance is always created, preventing potential errors if 'nodes' is set to 0 or a negative number.
testground/README.md (4)
3-6: Improve clarity and correct grammatical issues in the introduction.The updated introduction provides valuable context about the project's approach. However, there are a few areas that could be improved:
- Consider rephrasing "we did a lot of simplifications" to be more precise.
- In the first bullet point, "are" should be "is" when referring to "each node".
- Use "a" instead of "an" before "unique" as it starts with a consonant sound.
Here's a suggested revision:
- The implementation is inspired by [testground](https://github.com/testground/testground), but we did a lot of simplifications to make it easier to deploy: + The implementation is inspired by [testground](https://github.com/testground/testground), but we have made several simplifications to facilitate easier deployment: - - No centralized sync service, each node are assigned an unique continuous integer identifier, and node's hostname can be derived from that, that's how nodes discover each other and build the network. + - No centralized sync service: each node is assigned a unique continuous integer identifier, and the node's hostname can be derived from that. This is how nodes discover each other and build the network. - - Don't support networking configuration, but we might implement it in the future. + - Networking configuration is not currently supported, but we may implement it in the future.These changes improve clarity and correct the grammatical issues while maintaining the original meaning.
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[style] ~3-~3: The phrase ‘a lot of’ might be wordy and overused. Consider using an alternative.
Context: ....com/testground/testground), but we did a lot of simplifications to make it easier to de...(A_LOT_OF)
[uncategorized] ~5-~5: The verb “are” doesn’t seem to fit in this context, “is” is probably more formally correct.
Context: ... No centralized sync service, each node are assigned an unique continuous integer i...(AI_HYDRA_LEO_CPT_ARE_IS)
[misspelling] ~5-~5: Use “a” instead of ‘an’ if the following word doesn’t start with a vowel sound, e.g. ‘a sentence’, ‘a university’.
Context: ...ed sync service, each node are assigned an unique continuous integer identifier, a...(EN_A_VS_AN)
26-29: Add explanation for the one-liner command.The addition of the one-liner command is helpful for advanced users, but it might be confusing for those less familiar with shell commands. Consider adding a brief explanation of what the command does. For example:
This one-liner command does the following: 1. Builds the image using nix 2. Loads the image into Docker 3. Extracts the image ID from the output 4. Tags the loaded image with the desired name Note: Adjust the architecture (aarch64-linux) as needed for your system.This explanation will help users understand the purpose of each part of the command and how to modify it for their needs.
37-46: Add explanations for new command parameters.The updated command includes several new parameters that are not explained in the list below. To improve user understanding, consider adding explanations for the following parameters:
--validator-generate-load--tx-type erc20-transfer--app-patch--config-patch--genesis-patchFor example, you could add:
* `validator-generate-load`: Enables load generation on validator nodes. * `tx-type`: Specifies the type of transactions to generate (in this case, ERC20 transfers). * `app-patch`: Applies a patch to the app.toml configuration file. * `config-patch`: Applies a patch to the config.toml configuration file. * `genesis-patch`: Applies a patch to the genesis.json file.This will provide users with a better understanding of the purpose and effect of each parameter.
67-70: Explain new Docker Compose command parameters.The Docker Compose command has been updated with new parameters, but their purpose is not explained. To improve user understanding, consider adding brief explanations for the new parameters. For example:
The Docker Compose command uses the following parameters: * `--ext-str outputs=/tmp/outputs`: Specifies the output directory for collected node data. * `--ext-code nodes=3`: Sets the number of nodes to run in the composition. You can adjust these parameters as needed for your specific use case.This explanation will help users understand how to customize the command for their needs.
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[style] ~3-~3: The phrase ‘a lot of’ might be wordy and overused. Consider using an alternative.
Context: ....com/testground/testground), but we did a lot of simplifications to make it easier to de...(A_LOT_OF)
[uncategorized] ~5-~5: The verb “are” doesn’t seem to fit in this context, “is” is probably more formally correct.
Context: ... No centralized sync service, each node are assigned an unique continuous integer i...(AI_HYDRA_LEO_CPT_ARE_IS)
[misspelling] ~5-~5: Use “a” instead of ‘an’ if the following word doesn’t start with a vowel sound, e.g. ‘a sentence’, ‘a university’.
Context: ...ed sync service, each node are assigned an unique continuous integer identifier, a...(EN_A_VS_AN)
[misspelling] ~23-~23: This word is normally spelled with a hyphen.
Context: ...-chain/cronos-testground:latestOr one liner like this:bash docker load < $(nix...(EN_COMPOUNDS_ONE_LINER)
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testground/benchmark/compositions/docker-compose.jsonnet (1)
8-8: Improved flexibility in output directory configurationThe change from a hardcoded path to
std.extVar('outputs')for the volume mapping is a good improvement. It allows for more flexible configuration of the output directory based on external input, making the setup more adaptable to different environments or use cases.testground/README.md (1)
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1-77: Overall improvements to the README with minor suggestions for enhancement.The updates to the README file significantly improve the documentation by providing more detailed instructions, explaining new features, and offering specific commands for different environments. The changes align well with the PR objectives of updating the Testground README.
Key improvements include:
- Clarified introduction with project-specific simplifications.
- Detailed build instructions for different macOS architectures.
- Updated data generation command with new parameters.
- Revised Docker Compose instructions.
- Updated information about running benchmarks in a Kubernetes cluster.
The suggested improvements in the previous comments will further enhance the clarity and user-friendliness of the documentation. Once these minor issues are addressed, the README will provide comprehensive and accurate guidance for users of the Testground project.
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[misspelling] ~23-~23: This word is normally spelled with a hyphen.
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testground/README.md (3)
3-6: Improve clarity and grammar in the introduction.The introduction provides valuable context about the project's inspiration and simplifications. However, there are a few minor grammatical issues that can be addressed to enhance clarity:
- Line 3: Consider replacing "a lot of" with a more precise phrase like "several" or "numerous".
- Line 5: Change "are assigned an unique" to "is assigned a unique".
Here's a suggested revision:
- The implementation is inspired by [testground](https://github.com/testground/testground), but we did a lot of simplifications to make it easier to deploy: + The implementation is inspired by [testground](https://github.com/testground/testground), but we made several simplifications to make it easier to deploy: - No centralized sync service, each node are assigned an unique continuous integer identifier, and node's hostname can be derived from that, that's how nodes discover each other and build the network. + No centralized sync service, each node is assigned a unique continuous integer identifier, and the node's hostname can be derived from that. This is how nodes discover each other and build the network.🧰 Tools
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[style] ~3-~3: The phrase ‘a lot of’ might be wordy and overused. Consider using an alternative.
Context: ....com/testground/testground), but we did a lot of simplifications to make it easier to de...(A_LOT_OF)
[uncategorized] ~5-~5: The verb “are” doesn’t seem to fit in this context, “is” is probably more formally correct.
Context: ... No centralized sync service, each node are assigned an unique continuous integer i...(AI_HYDRA_LEO_CPT_ARE_IS)
[misspelling] ~5-~5: Use “a” instead of ‘an’ if the following word doesn’t start with a vowel sound, e.g. ‘a sentence’, ‘a university’.
Context: ...ed sync service, each node are assigned an unique continuous integer identifier, a...(EN_A_VS_AN)
16-17: Approve changes and suggest minor improvement.The additions to the "Build Image" section are valuable:
- The specific instructions for different Mac architectures (lines 16-17) improve clarity for users.
- The one-liner command (lines 26-29) provides a convenient alternative for advanced users.
These changes enhance the usability of the documentation. Great job!
Minor suggestion: Hyphenate "one liner" to "one-liner" in line 23 for correct spelling.
Also applies to: 26-29
77-77: Approve update to cluster running instructions.The change in the "Run In Cluster" section is a significant improvement:
- It replaces the previous TODO note with concrete information.
- It directs users to the appropriate resource (cronos-testground repository) for running benchmarks in a Kubernetes cluster.
- This update aligns well with the PR objective of bringing the README up to date.
Consider adding a brief explanation of what cronos-testground is and why users should refer to it. This could provide more context and improve the user's understanding. For example:
- Please use [cronos-testground](https://github.com/crypto-org-chain/cronos-testground) to run the benchmark in k8s cluster. + Please use [cronos-testground](https://github.com/crypto-org-chain/cronos-testground), our dedicated repository for Kubernetes-based benchmarking, to run the benchmark in a k8s cluster.
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[style] ~3-~3: The phrase ‘a lot of’ might be wordy and overused. Consider using an alternative.
Context: ....com/testground/testground), but we did a lot of simplifications to make it easier to de...(A_LOT_OF)
[uncategorized] ~5-~5: The verb “are” doesn’t seem to fit in this context, “is” is probably more formally correct.
Context: ... No centralized sync service, each node are assigned an unique continuous integer i...(AI_HYDRA_LEO_CPT_ARE_IS)
[misspelling] ~5-~5: Use “a” instead of ‘an’ if the following word doesn’t start with a vowel sound, e.g. ‘a sentence’, ‘a university’.
Context: ...ed sync service, each node are assigned an unique continuous integer identifier, a...(EN_A_VS_AN)
[misspelling] ~23-~23: This word is normally spelled with a hyphen.
Context: ...-chain/cronos-testground:latestOr one liner like this:bash docker load < $(nix...(EN_COMPOUNDS_ONE_LINER)
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testground/README.md (3)
37-46: Approve updated data generation command.The changes to the "Generate data files locally" section significantly improve the documentation:
- The updated command (lines 37-46) includes new parameters such as
--validator-generate-load,--fullnodes,--num-accounts, and--tx-type.- The additions provide users with more flexibility and control over the data generation process.
- The updated command aligns well with the PR objective of bringing the README up to date.
These changes enhance the usability and completeness of the documentation. Excellent work!
67-70: Approve updates to Docker Compose section.The changes to the "Run With Docker Compose" section (previously "Run In Local Docker") are well-implemented:
- The updated command (lines 67-70) provides more options and clarity for users.
- The new title more accurately describes the content of the section.
- The changes successfully incorporate the suggestions from past review comments, including the use of
jsonnetand the updated Docker Compose command.These improvements enhance the accuracy and usability of the documentation. Great job on addressing the previous feedback!
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1-77: Overall assessment: Excellent update to the READMEThis PR successfully addresses the main objective of updating the Testground README. The changes significantly improve the document's clarity, structure, and content. Key improvements include:
- A clearer introduction explaining the project's inspiration and simplifications.
- Updated build instructions for different Mac architectures.
- An enhanced data file generation section with more flexible parameters.
- Improved Docker Compose running instructions.
- Updated information for running benchmarks in a Kubernetes cluster.
The minor suggestions provided in the review comments are aimed at further refining the already high-quality updates. Great job on bringing this documentation up to date and improving its overall usability!
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[misspelling] ~23-~23: This word is normally spelled with a hyphen.
Context: ...-chain/cronos-testground:latestOr one liner like this:bash docker load < $(nix...(EN_COMPOUNDS_ONE_LINER)
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