PEP 701: Incorporate more feedback from the discussion thread

[pablogsal]

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[lysnikolaou]

A couple of minor comments here.

[CAM-Gerlach]

I added a few reST syntax comments and suggested grammar/phrasing fixes on the last bit; skimming the other changes, I noticed some other missing commas and grammar/phrasing issues that made it less easy to read than it could be, but I didn't want add a bunch more unsolicited suggestions. If you'd like me to copyedit it here via GitHub suggestions, or as a follow, just let me know.

[pablogsal]

Thanks a lot @CAM-Gerlach for the fantastic suggestions!

[pablogsal]

If you'd like me to copyedit it here via GitHub suggestions, or as a follow, just let me know.

Here is fine if you are ok with that Edit: this is getting quite big, so let's do those as a follow up

[CAM-Gerlach]

Edit: this is getting quite big, so let's do those as a follow up

Yup, that sounds best to me, particularly since I'm going to need to focus on completing my research/degree as my first priority in the next couple months, so I can't promise I'll get to it right away anyway and don't want to hold this one up.

[pablogsal]

Edit: this is getting quite big, so let's do those as a follow up

Yup, that sounds best to me, particularly since I'm going to need to focus on completing my research/degree as my first priority in the next couple months, so I can't promise I'll get to it right away anyway and don't want to hold this one up.

Best of luck for that research/degree! 🤘