doc-review-qs copy edit of quick starts for ModelMesh

[MelissaFlinn]

Motivation

Copy edit requested by development

Modifications

Multiple updates to the readme files

Result

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• Unit tests pass locally
• FVT tests pass locally
• If the PR adds a new container image or updates the tag of an existing image (not build within cpaas), is the corresponding change made in live-builder and cpaas-midstream to add/update the image tag in the operator CSV? Link the PRs if applicable

Checklist items below are applicable for development targeted to both fast and stable branches/tags

• Tested modelmesh serving deployment with odh-manifests and ran odh-manifests-e2e tests locally

[openshift-ci]

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[MelissaFlinn]

Needs a review by @Jooho

[MelissaFlinn]

My apologies - this PR needs a review by Jooho Lee before it is merged and so I changed the status to DRAFT

[Jooho]

@MelissaFlinn Thanks for your review!! I leave some comments on the files. Please take a look at them.
Plus, could you add your signature to the commit. This is how you can do

oc commit -s -m "XXX"

[MelissaFlinn]

Thank you @Jooho - I addressed your comments and added my signature to the second commit.
This PR is ready for merging after approval by the project owners. Thank you

[Jooho]

/lgtm

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