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Pull request overview
Updates the marketing copy on the Chiseled Ubuntu for .NET page to reflect revised messaging and terminology from WD-35596.
Changes:
- Refreshed meta description and hero messaging to emphasize Canonical positioning and security maintenance.
- Updated explanatory sections with new headings and revised phrasing (e.g., OCI-compliant, secure-by-design, CI/CD efficiency).
- Adjusted Ubuntu Pro/security and open source support wording for clarity and consistency.
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| Reduces the attack surface of chiseled Ubuntu images, so they’re less vulnerable, need fewer security updates, and your users have less downtime. | ||
| Ultra-small image size reduces the attack surface of chiseled Ubuntu images, so they're less vulnerable, need fewer security updates, and your users have less downtime. |
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Typographic apostrophes are used elsewhere on the page (e.g., “There’s”), but this line uses a straight apostrophe ("they're"). For consistency in rendered copy, use a consistent apostrophe style across the page (either all curly or all straight).
| Ultra-small image size reduces the attack surface of chiseled Ubuntu images, so they're less vulnerable, need fewer security updates, and your users have less downtime. | |
| Ultra-small image size reduces the attack surface of chiseled Ubuntu images, so they’re less vulnerable, need fewer security updates, and your users have less downtime. |
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| Meaning, no apt or bash in the final image removes entire classes of attack, fully disarming potential attackers. | ||
| No package manager and no shell meaning, no apt or bash in the final image removes entire classes of attack, fully disarming potential attackers. |
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This sentence reads as a run-on and is grammatically awkward (“...no shell meaning, no apt...”); it would be clearer split into two sentences or rephrased (e.g., define the claim first, then the implication). This is user-facing copy, so readability matters.
| No package manager and no shell meaning, no apt or bash in the final image removes entire classes of attack, fully disarming potential attackers. | |
| The absence of a package manager and a shell (no apt or bash in the final image) removes entire classes of attack and fully disarms potential attackers. |
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| <p>Means applications are always up-to-date and ready to handle the increased traffic and workload.</p> | ||
| <p>Faster transfer times means applications are always up-to-date and ready to handle the increased traffic and workload.</p> |
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Subject/verb agreement is off (“times means” → “times mean”). Also, the claim “always up-to-date” doesn’t logically follow from “faster transfer times” and feels mismatched with the new “CI/CD efficiency” heading; consider rewording to describe concrete CI/CD benefits (e.g., quicker pulls/deployments, reduced pipeline time).
| <p>Faster transfer times means applications are always up-to-date and ready to handle the increased traffic and workload.</p> | |
| <p>Faster transfer times mean quicker image pulls and deployments, reducing CI/CD pipeline time and helping applications keep pace with demand.</p> |
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| Open source your full stack with confidence, from the data centre to the cloud, from containers to the database, taking in LMA, server, and cloud-native applications along the way, all with support from Canonical. | ||
| Open source your full stack – clouds, servers, data centers, apps and more – all with support from Canonical. |
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Spelling is inconsistent with the earlier copy that used “data centre”. Pick one locale (en-GB vs en-US) for this page and keep it consistent (e.g., “data centres” if using en-GB).
| Open source your full stack – clouds, servers, data centers, apps and more – all with support from Canonical. | |
| Open source your full stack – clouds, servers, data centres, apps and more – all with support from Canonical. |
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