You need an editor

[andrewcooke]

I think your book is important, useful, and interesting, but, by God, do you need an editor. Someone who can write.

Do not use "disjoint" twice in the fourth paragraph, etc.

This is not meant to discourage - as I said, I think it's worth working on - but to push you to find someone who can improve the flow of what is written.

Good luck.

[Derek-Jones]

You are right, the words are in need of lots of attention.

Improve the flow? I'm pleased that you think one exists. I am now working to try and connect the material to hopefully produce some semblance of a flow. We will see.

Being driven by the discovery of data is a less than ideal way of writing a book.