Adds Ian's copy edits to billing data page (#45)

Author: sarahsimpers

source/billing-data.txt

@@ -28,7 +28,9 @@ also provides cloud spend governance tools for you to:
 - Categorize {+service+} resources based on your organization's billing needs.
 - Leverage billing data to visualize and understand your {+service+} spending.
 - Receive notifications when Atlas spending exceeds a specified threshold.
-- Pull billing data programmatically to integrate with your FinOps tools.
+- Pull billing data programmatically to integrate with your FinOps
+  tools for charge-back and accounting purposes within each department
+  and application.
 
 On this page, learn how to use built-in {+service+} tools and
 {+service+} billing data to track, manage, and optimize your cloud
@@ -37,33 +39,6 @@ spending.
 {+service+} Features for Billing Data
 -------------------------------------
 
-Create Billing Dashboards
-~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
-
-You can visualize your billing data in a |charts| billing dashboard
-to help you optimize your |service| spending. Billing dashboards contain
-prebuilt charts that help you monitor your {+service+} usage in an
-organization across different categories and periods of time, and
-|charts| integrates with {+service+} to seamlessly ingest billing data.
-
-.. figure:: /includes/images/atlas-billing-dashboard.png
-   :figwidth: 750px
-   :alt: Atlas Billing Dashboard example.
-
-By default, billing dashboards include the following metrics and charts:
-
-- Total spending across the organization
-- Biggest spenders in the organization
-- Total spending by instance size, project, cluster, product category, or SKU
-- Total cost by product category
-
-You can also customize your billing dashboard by applying :ref:`dashboard
-filters <billing-dashboard-filter>` and adding new charts, including any
-charts that use :ref:`tags <configure-resource-tags>` that you've
-applied to your billing data. 
-
-To create or manage a billing dashboard, see :ref:`billing-dashboards`.
-
 Apply Resource Tags
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
@@ -83,7 +58,7 @@ and reports. Combine this feature with :ref:`resource tags
 <configure-resource-tags>` to easily categorize your {+service+}
 spending.
 
-For example, you can retrieve all your pending invoices with the
+You can retrieve all your pending invoices with the
 :oas-atlas-op:`Return All Pending Invoices for One Organization
 </listPendingInvoices>` |api| endpoint. The endpoints response body
 contains the ``results.lineItems.tags`` field, which reflect the tags
@@ -150,3 +125,30 @@ your usage incurred by each of your {+clusters+} and serverless instances
 across all your projects.
 
 To view line-item charges, see :ref:`view-past-invoices`.
+
+Create Billing Dashboards
+~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
+
+You can visualize your billing data in a |charts| billing dashboard
+to help you optimize your |service| spending. Billing dashboards contain
+prebuilt charts that help you monitor your {+service+} usage in an
+organization across different categories and periods of time, and
+|charts| integrates with {+service+} to seamlessly ingest billing data.
+
+.. figure:: /includes/images/atlas-billing-dashboard.png
+   :figwidth: 750px
+   :alt: Atlas Billing Dashboard example.
+
+By default, billing dashboards include the following metrics and charts:
+
+- Total spending across the organization
+- Biggest spenders in the organization
+- Total spending by instance size, project, cluster, product category, or SKU
+- Total cost by product category
+
+You can also customize your billing dashboard by applying :ref:`dashboard
+filters <billing-dashboard-filter>` and adding new charts, including any
+charts that use :ref:`tags <configure-resource-tags>` that you've
+applied to your billing data. 
+
+To create or manage a billing dashboard, see :ref:`billing-dashboards`.