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Author: MariekeGO

connector/doc/ETL_Systems_23222_-_23223.md

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 ## About
 
-This connector is used to monitor and configure ETL 23222 and 23223 devices.
-ETL Systems 23222 unit is a 32:1 switch with 32 inputs and 1 output and 1 RF monitoring port.
-This communicationn protocol allows for full control and monitoring of the system.
+This connector is used to monitor and configure ETL 23222 and 23223 devices. The ETL Systems 23222 unit is a 32:1 switch with 32 inputs, 1 output, and 1 RF monitoring port. This connector allows full control and monitoring of the system.
 
+### Key Features
 
-### Key features
-
-- **Real-Time Monitoring**: Tracks temperature, voltage levels, and amplifier currents to ensure optimal performance.
-- **Comprehensive Configuration Options**: Supports multiple ports, aliases, and shelf naming for flexible setup and customization.
-- **Matrix Switching Capability**: Enables seamless routing of signals.
+- **Real-time monitoring**: Tracks temperature, voltage levels, and amplifier currents to ensure optimal performance.
+- **Comprehensive configuration options**: Supports multiple ports, aliases, and shelf naming for flexible setup and customization.
+- **Matrix switching capability**: Enables seamless routing of signals.
 
 ## Use Cases
 
 ### Real-Time Monitoring and Diagnostics
 
-**Challenge:** Detecting and addressing faults quickly to minimize downtime.
+**Challenge**: Detecting and addressing faults quickly to minimize downtime.
 
-**Solution:** Connectors tracks parameters vital to proper functioning of the system.
+**Solution**: Track the parameters vital to the proper functioning of the system using this connector.
 
-## Prerequisites
+## Technical Reference
 
-- **DataMiner version 10.3 or higher** is required.
+### Prerequisites
 
-## Technical Information
+- **DataMiner version 10.3 or higher** is required.
 
 > [!NOTE]
-> For detailed technical information, refer to our [technical documentation](xref:Connector_help_ETL_Systems_23222_-_23223_Technical).
+> For detailed technical information, refer to our [technical documentation](xref:Connector_help_ETL_Systems_23222_-_23223_Technical).

connector/doc/ETL_Systems_23222_-_23223_Technical.md

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 ## About
 
-ETL Systems 23222 unit is a 32:1 switch with 32 inputs and 1 output and 1 RF monitoring port.
-This communicationn protocol allows for full control and monitoring of the system.
+The ETL Systems 23222 unit is a 32:1 switch with 32 inputs, 1 output, and 1 RF monitoring port. This connector allows full control and monitoring of the system.
 
 ## Configuration
 
 ### Connections
 
-#### IP connection
+#### IP connection - Main
 
-The connector uses IP connection to connect to the monitored device. That means that the user will need to enter the correct IP address and port when creating the element for the first time.
+This connector uses an IP connection and requires the following input during element creation:
+
+- **IP address/host**: The polling IP of the destination.
+- **IP port**: The IP port of the destination.
 
 ## How to use
 
 ### General page
 
-The general page contains the **Basic Control and Status** section and the **Chassis Status** section.
-
-There are statuses for *PSU 1* and *PSU 2* for the matrix as well as for the Chassis.
+The General page contains the **Basic Control and Status** section and the **Chassis Status** section, with status information for PSU 1 and 2 for the matrix as well as the chassis.
 
-Parameter *Matrix Status* indicates the alarm summary of the matrix. It can be *Ok* or *Failed*.
+The **Matrix Status** parameter indicates the alarm summary of the matrix (*Ok* or *Failed*).
 
-Button *Short Switch* allows the user to switch the selected multi-port to the common-port.
+With the **Short Switch** button, you can switch the selected multi-port to the common port.
 
-User also has the option to change the address of the chassis with the *Chassis Status Address*.
+You can also change the address of the chassis with the **Chassis Status Address** parameter.
 
 ### Monitoring page
 
-Monitoring page provides real-time status tracking for key system parameters. It is divided into three key sections:
+The Monitoring page provides real-time status tracking for key system parameters. It is divided into three key sections:
 
-- *Temperature monitoring*: Tracks the CPU temperature.
-- *Voltage monitoring*: Tracks the *PSU 1* and *PSU 2* voltages as well as *PSU Bus voltage* and *5V and 3V Rail* voltages.
-- *Current monitoring*: Tracks the *Amplifiers 1,2 and 3 Bias Currents*.
+- **Temperature monitoring**: Tracks the CPU temperature.
+- **Voltage monitoring**: Tracks the PSU 1 and PSU 2 voltages as well as the **PSU Bus** voltage and **5V and 3V Rail** voltages.
+- **Current monitoring**: Tracks the amplifiers 1, 2, and 3 bias currents.
 
-Also on the page user can retrieve the *Monitoring Status* and can change the limits to the ±20% upper and lower limits for the Amplifier bias currents on the specified chassis.
+You can also retrieve the monitoring status on this page, and you can change the limits to the ±20% upper and lower limits for the amplifier bias currents on the specified chassis.
 
 ### Configuration page
 
-Configuration page contains numerous parameters that user change based on their preference.
-
-User can change the shelf name and can retrieve all of the aliases change their address and reset them to their default values. Number of matrix multi and common-ports can be edited. Base and Chassis IP can also be changed. Dataport port and timeout can be edited as well.
+On this page, you can change numerous parameters based on your preferences: You can change the shelf name, retrieve all of the aliases, change their address, and reset them to their default values. You can also edit the number of matrix multi-ports and common ports, the base and chassis IP, and the data port and timeout.
 
-This page contains also information *Firmware* and *Bootloader*. It contains informations such as *revision*, *number* and *date* for both firmware and bootloader.
+The page also contains information about both the firmware and bootloader: the revision, number, and date.